Made a new icon

I've borrowed them from other people before, and done minor modifications to existing ones, but this is the first one I've made from scratch. No copyright issues. I took the photo (it's the Grossglockner Pass, southern Germany), I wrote the haiku, I put it all together. I'm not sure, though - the text seems hard to read, and other people seem to get the same size much clearer. Ideas?

Here's the original photo, btw
( pic under here )