Well, I didn't expect *that*

Remember I said I'd found a couple of little comunities that did writing challenges http://community.livejournal.com/paper_feelings/? So I entered, thinking this would be good practice. You're allowed two entries to each, so I threw in a "here's one I prepared earlier" (a spare scene from a Kallyr story), and one I wrote specifically for this. The old one got a placing.
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